Week 10 Class
19 May 2017
Lecture
Today Patrica went through what we have to have in our proposal and it was a good reminder of what I was still missing in mine.
2:30 Writing workshop
In the workshop I passed my first draft two three other peers who gave me valuable feedback (e.g. my sentences were waaaaay to long!) and so I could go back while I was waiting for my turn to speak to my advisor by shortening and re-wording them. (Also helps that I upgraded my Grammarly account, horray!)
3:40 Advisor session
I talked to Mark today and showed my visual print outs that I had for the Supercrit, as I haven't seen him since Week 4 (I think...it was definitely before the Midbreak!) and he gave me great feedback:
Which is why I started doing a system for my ideas:
Lecture
Today Patrica went through what we have to have in our proposal and it was a good reminder of what I was still missing in mine.
2:30 Writing workshop
In the workshop I passed my first draft two three other peers who gave me valuable feedback (e.g. my sentences were waaaaay to long!) and so I could go back while I was waiting for my turn to speak to my advisor by shortening and re-wording them. (Also helps that I upgraded my Grammarly account, horray!)
3:40 Advisor session
I talked to Mark today and showed my visual print outs that I had for the Supercrit, as I haven't seen him since Week 4 (I think...it was definitely before the Midbreak!) and he gave me great feedback:
- very interesting project, seems like I know my stuff, I talked very confidently about it (my thoughts on this: seems like I won't have any problems presenting my project to the tutors in Sem 2)
- I should show something in my intention > this could be a diagram/shape that shows the system of what I'm intending to do. I just need to give a taste of it!
Which is why I started doing a system for my ideas:
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